WOW!

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    WOW!
    I ask Him for just a crumb and He gives me a slice.
    I thank Him for each breath and He promises me eternal life.
    I pray for small and He blesses me really big.
    I’m ashamed of my mistakes and He forgives me for all the little mess that I did.
    I ask Him to order my steps and He’s there every step of the way.
    I ask protection for an hour and He watches my back all day.
    I think about His goodness and I can’t help but to smile.
    The sun shines, the birds chirp, and I am ever thankful that I am His child.
    Sometimes I sit and think what a strong and courageous man that He is.
    I just can’t help but be grateful at how He always handles His.

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    bklynrizz commented on WOW!

    10-19-2009

    Nicely done. Try keeping each line to ten syllables. Also try keeping a left margine. On line four where it says....for all the little mess that I did. Try rewording this, may be .....for all the little mistakes I made. Or try shortening the line. All in all it is heart felt emotional. Keep writing.
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    theglender

    10/22/2009

    Thank you for that tip

    lena commented on WOW!

    03-17-2009

    i rated this poem a 10 because it is soooo true...good work!!
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    theglender

    10/22/2009

    Thank you

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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