Unfair

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    Unfair

     One day I found a competition
    In which you could enter a poem 
    My friend and I had wrote one
    So we read the rules to know 'em
    Thankfully the rules were quite clear
    We thought it would be so much fun
    But we saw a rule that changed that
    " only poems written by one"
    It was such an amazing poem
    It didn't seem quite fair
    That there was this one shared poem
    That no one else could share

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    redbloodink commented on Unfair

    01-24-2010

    not here..... Multiple artistry is welcomed here..... With open arms to inspire talent and each-other we should be able to write poems songs and anything else together.... ty for sharing and please bring the work here would love to read.... I have writen a few poems with others I have met in my life what a blessing to share raw talent.... red
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    karix13

    01/24/2010

    Read the grandfather clock poem written with miss thompson. thats the poem I wrote about.

    karix13 commented on Unfair

    01-24-2010

    True story
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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