The Warning - A Haiku
The great calm jade sea
Silently swells murky bath
Casting its warning
Silently swells murky bath
Casting its warning
The Warning - A Haiku
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I haven't written a Haiku since high school - a long time ago! I have seen many of them on here and figured I would give it a shot. It was a lot harder than I remember - to say so much in 17 syllables is a challenge!
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Poem Comments
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MindNumbing commented on The Warning - A Haiku
03-30-2010
- Haiku is so tough to write but so fun to read. I love this little gem ~ Great job!
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04/01/2010
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dahlusion commented on The Warning - A Haiku
03-23-2010
- Such lovely poetic writing. Bravo!!! Peace and Light, Dah
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ginga commented on The Warning - A Haiku
03-18-2010
- DAwn, I esp like these 2 words "murky bath" since one may ask murky with what? And there are 100's of answers. Cool! ginga
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gogant commented on The Warning - A Haiku
03-14-2010
- Let's hope that the turbulent sea does give some kind of advanced omen of its power to be...............Very impressive.....................g
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03/14/2010
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WordSlinger commented on The Warning - A Haiku
03-14-2010
- Nice, one day the see will wash us clean off the earth, and still sound so beautiful, ty WS
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03/14/2010
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