One Day Too Many

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One Day Too Many

One day too many
Or too many in one day
I don’t even know
The words to say

This is war
And people die
But it fucks with my head
And hurts inside

When the wounded come in
You expect to see blood
But not from kids
That no wrong have they done

In the wrong place
Or at the wrong time
When the bomb went off
And let shrapnel fly

It was just passed 3
Outside of a school
We were just driving by
There was nothing we could do

I can still hear the screams
Of the children near by
But its 2 in the morning
And in my bed I lie..........

By: Kevin Bakker

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soulwriter commented on One Day Too Many

12-29-2008

Very good, I can feel the pain and the emotion,, almost as if I were there and it delivers true empathy. I normally don't like poems that rhyme line to line because it can cause the author to inject words that really don't fit but are there because t

beautifuldeath commented on One Day Too Many

12-27-2008

very touching. my husband lost his best friend and roommate over there and some of the things I have heard are just horrible.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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