Nothing To Break Your Fall

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    • Poetry will always emerge out of the shadows of depression, shining like a star in the scarcity of light.

    Nothing To Break Your Fall

     

    In real life,

    When you jump off the edge

    There is no mattress to break your fall

    There is no turning back

    Just the end you were seeking

     

    When you are gone,

    There is no pain or depression,

    But the darkness takes over

    Not a candle will bring you light

    Not a thing can make you bright

     

    You are tied down by the darkness,

    Unable to move and just lifeless

    There is no more you

    Nothing you can see

    You have died and you resent the fee

     

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    KtIrish commented on Nothing To Break Your Fall

    12-27-2009

    The last line is very poignant. It's very powerful. Its speaks loudly of the prce that is paid by giving up.
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    iLuvPoetryJACOB

    12/28/2009

    thank you, but this poem is not as good as my new ones. i really appreciate your sweet words

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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