Here Comes The Rain

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    Here Comes The Rain

    Here comes the rain,

    Falling on my head,

    Burning holes into the

    Essence of my life.

    Have you seen the sky,

    Draining of all color,

    Thoughts bleeding grey?

    Could you tell that the moisture in the air
    Tasted of rust?
    Was the sun blocked off

    By all the clouds that drenched the ash-colored sky?

    Did the words escape your mouth,

    The ones that bring worry and fear and pain,

    Yet they prepare you for the storm?

    The words are bleak and cold:

    Here comes the rain.

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    Dead4Rest commented on Here Comes The Rain

    11-27-2009

    very good poem, I enjoyed every line, I love the rain as much as I love the night :) so the images you have in this poem, really had an impact on me, and I like how in the end, the rain seems more of a metaphor for great sadness and depression, great poem :)
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    Vampire commented on Here Comes The Rain

    11-22-2009

    I like how you air able to use simple descriptions to deliver such an image and message. You can go somewhere with this and I hope you stick with it. Very nice job and the simplicity behind it has talent. Awsome job......
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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