Moot Points

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  • Dark

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    I have taken a little from some of my poems to make this. Sorry if it doesn't make sense on its own.

    Moot Points

    Moot points into a dark heart

    Through typed words evil departs

    Poems unleash the stirring inside

    His inner hurt - feelings he can’t hide


    Ventured into crevices of the mind

    Death and loneliness sometimes he finds

    Following him through trials of the soul

    Unstable feelings of being muy loco


    Random images spew onto the screen

    To a virtual society freeing a vile fiend

    A psychopathic killer in an alley released

    Won’t his soul ever find silence and peace?


    Suicide thoughts behind the words

    Brain haze doldrums can never be heard

    An original prose - a toxic thought keeps

    Swirling above rocks, blindly he leaps


    Statements in verse so irrelevant

    Words by the wind of no importance

    Should his whisper be remembered after he has gone?

    Will the world say his point was moot, askew, and wrong?

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    ccslim commented on Moot Points

    06-03-2011

    I was following a life yet a soul separated. Strange I know but it felt disconnected from 1st person trying to connect,
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    MootPoint

    06/07/2011

    I am not sure what you mean. I know this write was a bit scattered because it touched on many of my writes.

    cheronld commented on Moot Points

    04-27-2011

    Hmmm....what a nice view into the perspective that is you....almost like a map and cliff notes of your mind and writes....I liked the view that you gave on this...the slight comedic tone kept it from being too dark....I would say that in this....your point was not moot...but...your point was made...nicely done my friend...Cher
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    MootPoint

    04/28/2011

    How many people in this world really make a difference? When we are gone, and 100 years from now, will any of our words be remembered? People every day just go trudging through life not seeing the world around them. Is it possible that anyone of us here in the trenches can make a difference? I hope so. Hey, thanks for the comment. -Al ")

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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