Love training

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Love training


Sensuality 
    
abounds within

     
  at the first whisper

of your sensouos voice

   your lips do control me
 
  in this  lesson of passion
   
  I am your eager pupil

  in training for love

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BrokenHeart2009 commented on Love training

01-07-2011

Now Topaz this could be a song, it has a beat, like the part in training for love can be the repeating lyric, I like it. It sounds like it could be a hit:)

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

Topaz2011’s Poems (20)

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Title Comments
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A vision of love 3
Beyond the whispering wind 1
Soul Embraced 1
Tender mercy 2
Sweet romantic trappings 1
Legend of the enchanted river 2
Perfect little pieces 1
Return love to me 3
Damaged 1
Memory Streams 1
Crimson stains 1
A rose will have to do 1
Embrace the night 2
Love training 1
Memory cascade 1
I must except this 2
The mystery I miss 1
Love's joy 1
Dream SeaQuence 1