A vision of love

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  • Lost Love

    A vision of love
    She comes to him
    in twilight shadows

    Sweet scent of rose
    from nearby meadows

    Surrounds her quiet
    child like nature

    Demure and soft
    is her stature

    Behind the mask
    of mirrored glass

    Lost soul of love
    smiles from her past

    her aching heart
    longs for him much

    but she must live
    without his touch

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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on A vision of love

    09-07-2011

    I love this one! Love always in mind's sight but never in touch...........E
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    Viper89 commented on A vision of love

    03-16-2011

    Sound like the woman with the deadly touch. She loved a man but could not touch. They lived forever without ever touching each other. Truly splendid poem!!! Job well done!!!
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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