Return love to me

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One of my most popular poems.

Return love to me

Dark imprints of my sadness
shadowy flecks across my heart
once filled with happiness
until you broke it apart

Once overflowing with love,
misery now fills my cup
a mixture of pain and tears
I need love to fill it up.

I can see our bedroom silhouettes
soft prints where you used to lay
you nestled against my breast
as we whispered the night away.

Missing you is hurting me
And breaking my heart in two
You took away my fantasy
Now bring back all I gave to you.

Bring it back, give it back to me
Embrace me with in your arms again
All I want is what you took from me
Your tender love, minus the pain.

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gogant commented on Return love to me

01-13-2011

The deeper the love...the deeper the pain when it goes........This is simply beautiful in the way you imprison those who read this....into a dark abyss..............................................................gogant

ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Return love to me

01-13-2011

Beautiful expression of love lost. Your wording is eloquent. Great write. I wish you well in your healing process..............E

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Topaz2011’s Poems (20)

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A vision of love 3
Beyond the whispering wind 1
Soul Embraced 1
Tender mercy 2
Sweet romantic trappings 1
Legend of the enchanted river 2
Perfect little pieces 1
Return love to me 3
Damaged 1
Memory Streams 1
Crimson stains 1
A rose will have to do 1
Embrace the night 2
Love training 1
Memory cascade 1
I must except this 2
The mystery I miss 1
Love's joy 1
Dream SeaQuence 1