In The End
My soul has been drownedMy heart has been broken
My steps never to be found
And never to be spoken
My fists are bloody and bound
My feelings are just a token
All my friends will surround
Cause now I go into the ground.
In The End
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- aubrey
- Put up the longest thig I have every wrote please show it some love http://www.originalpoetry.com/deep-dark-love
Poem Commentary
Guess I was feeling a bit morbid this day.My heart has been broken
My steps never to be found
And never to be spoken
My fists are bloody and bound
My feelings are just a token
All my friends will surround
Cause now I go into the ground.
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NevillePark commented on In The End
11-29-2010
- Lovely poem man.! Clean, structured and it's concise.
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