Hurt

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  • aubrey
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Hurt

My soul is angry and sad,
It has a hole that I can't fill,
All I feel is sadness,
I keep it bottled up inside,
Keep a smile on my face,
Hide the pain deep inside,
Put on the show,
So no one will ever know,
How truly crushed my soul is,
I feel like crying,
Or mabye just dying,
Is there any hope out there,
Or am I destined to be alone forever,
With no one to touch, kiss, hug, and share with,
Mabye someday my soul will heal,
That someone will fill the hole deep inside me,
Until then I'll put on the show,
So no one will trully ever know,
How much I hurt inside.

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RStornes commented on Hurt

07-30-2009

This poem truly display the inner feelings of one who truly have wounds. It does describes a sense of hurt that really only God can fulfill. Very expressive.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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