Beautiful Woman

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    • aubrey
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    Not much to say here just poped into my head one night.

    Beautiful Woman

    Her movements are pure grace defined,

    Her eyes are like looking into heaven,

    Her laughter is what you would hear when angels sing,

    Her soul shines with the intensity of a million suns,

    Her smile directed towards you is sublime,

    Her embrace is worth going to battle a thousand miles away,

    Her tender kiss brings all men to their knees,

    Her love is what men live and die for.

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    nhorlandi commented on Beautiful Woman

    12-23-2009

    This is good, I like it pal. A very wonderful description of a beautiful damsel. I love the last two lines Her tender kiss brings all men to their knees, Her love is what men live and die for.
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    HarverTomsson commented on Beautiful Woman

    12-06-2009

    Shades of Homer's Illiad! Hinitng of Helen of Troy. Next to football and motorcycles this is what gives a guy reason to get up in the morning... or is it motorcycles and football? lol
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    tierra7 commented on Beautiful Woman

    08-09-2009

    this is a very Beautiful poem,it shows the beauty in your Soul ... the kindness of your heart shines thru your words...keep 'em flowin' to your pen... well worth a 10 many times over and over .. thank you for sharin' .....Peace And Joy, T-7
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    cmlestrade commented on Beautiful Woman

    08-07-2009

    This is totally beautiful. This is one lucky woman be she fact or fiction. Your description was tender, romantic , sublime. there are not enough syllables. This is tops
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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