Dawn is Coming

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    Dawn is Coming

     Dawn is Coming

    I weaved a dream tirelessly tried
    I fought and failed then I raised up;
    A life so vague a world so wide
    Couraged instilled in a weak heart.

    In dark cold nights there's a faint hope,
    A flimsy ray inspires and spoke:
    Get on and stand, have a strong hold,
    Dawn is coming start to move!

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    arianne commented on Dawn is Coming

    06-29-2010

    yeah, dawn offers more hope for the hopefuls, while sunset gives rest to the tired hearts; yet sunset suggests a new dawn to come before the next day. .... the magical routine of time....and we're just passing through one of these cycles...
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    redbloodink commented on Dawn is Coming

    06-24-2010

    I love the dawning of a new day.... the beauty of the sun rising and everything comming alive.... well waking back up from sleep...... red
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