Dawn is Coming

2 Comments

Dawn is Coming

Dawn is Coming

I weaved a dream tirelessly tried
I fought and failed then I raised up;
A life so vague a world so wide
Couraged instilled in a weak heart.

In dark cold nights there's a faint hope,
A flimsy ray inspires and spoke:
Get on and stand, have a strong hold,
Dawn is coming start to move!

Poem Comments

(2)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

arianne commented on Dawn is Coming

06-29-2010

yeah, dawn offers more hope for the hopefuls, while sunset gives rest to the tired hearts; yet sunset suggests a new dawn to come before the next day. .... the magical routine of time....and we're just passing through one of these cycles...

redbloodink commented on Dawn is Coming

06-24-2010

I love the dawning of a new day.... the beauty of the sun rising and everything comming alive.... well waking back up from sleep...... red

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

arianne’s Poems (28)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Old Pains 0
A Weakness in Passing 0
Not Meant To Be? 0
Time 0
A Place of Dreams 1
A Long Walk With Time 1
Wordless 1
Gone By the Years 0
A Muse's Wish 1
No Apologies 1
The Phantom 0
Dawn is Coming 2
Imaginary World 1
Insignificant Ghosts 1
The Many Why's 1
A Dozen Times 0
Stop the Rain 0
The Wait 0
Release Me 0
My LIfe Story in Verse 1
How Many Times? 1
If I Were Lucy 0
Life....A Road 0
For The Rest Of Our Lives 1
Love's Mystery 1
Just A Dream? 0
Love and Lovers 0
A Scream Within 2