you lied to me

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    please think about the trickery and deceit of satan our adversary

    you lied to me

    You lied to me

     

    You said that it will be a party down here

    But all I see is people shivering with fear

    You lied to me

    You said it will be nothing but fun

    But why it is 10 times hotter than the sun

    You lied to me                                     

    You said that I would have my own kingdom to rule

    But instead you made me look like a fool

    You lied to me

    You said that I will have everlasting peace

    But all I have is eternal grief

    You lied to me

    And said I have nothing to lose and everything to gain

    But why am I in all this pain

    I should’ve known from the start

    That following you would lead me to eternal dark

     

     

    Written by Marvin Crutchfield

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    ahardwalk commented on you lied to me

    06-28-2011

    WOW!!! This poem is off the chart crazy good!!! You did a great job even how you structured it fitted perfectly!! give this a tennn
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    Mrpoetry

    06/29/2011

    thanks for the comments but its God who blesses my hands and my mind to write

    winterkou commented on you lied to me

    06-27-2011

    great message portayed here. Most people don't realize just how hot hell really is. There is a devil and he will deceive. Praise be to God and in all His glory heaven reign and bring me peace . keep me from falling victim to the liar.
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    Mrpoetry

    06/29/2011

    thanks for your comments we are on the winning team Jesus is our captain heaven is our goal

    sassysweet commented on you lied to me

    04-20-2011

    Really good poem. I totally like this one. It say exactly what alot of people might or would have said on their way to hell! Love it actually.
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    Mrpoetry

    04/20/2011

    thanks for the comment I want people to recognize we need Jesus it is all about Jesus

    jesusfreake commented on you lied to me

    04-15-2011

    HAHA! I love this poem, this seriously must be what people are thinking when they enter Hell, .."YOU LIED!" ...this is amaaaaazing!!
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    Mrpoetry

    04/15/2011

    thanks lil sis in Christ remember we are agents for Jesus Christ for life. so we must speak truth always

    gregster commented on you lied to me

    04-12-2011

    devil is just a worm...just a small insect.dum bug..step on him
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    Mrpoetry

    04/13/2011

    yes he is. he is the only one that we are allowed to hate

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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