my flower

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    my flower

     i see a woman as a flower
    treat and nurture as we take a shower
    i rub her back when it aches
    and have her tell me that is all i can take
    i wipe her tears when she cries
    as we lay there looking at the sky
    when she says i'm tired i need some rest
    i say go ahead and lay on my chest
    because her smile just lights up the place
    when i call her beautiful to her face
    if you don't know by now
    i'm speaking of my wife
    and i am glad God gave her to me for life

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    danmartyjake1 commented on my flower

    12-07-2009

    That is a wonderful powerful poem to your wife and she is a lucky lady, too, to have you. God Bless!
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    Paradice21 commented on my flower

    12-07-2009

    A Very lovely and sentimental poem!! Nicely written!!
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    Paolo commented on my flower

    07-27-2009

    This is a beautiful way to celebrate your love. I feel the same toward my husband, God brought him to me.
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    scrye commented on my flower

    07-22-2009

    so absolutely beautiful poem mrpoetry and your wife is just as lucky as you consider yourself to be. BEAUTIFUL is all i can say on this one. Felt all your emotion and the wording was excellently placed. A 10 from me for this one.
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    SyndriaM commented on my flower

    07-21-2009

    this is a wonderful poem!! its nice to know that there are still some good men out there and your wife is a very lucky woman.
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    Mrpoetry

    07/21/2009

    thank you i do love my wife dearly

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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