my flower

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my flower

i see a woman as a flower
treat and nurture as we take a shower
i rub her back when it aches
and have her tell me that is all i can take
i wipe her tears when she cries
as we lay there looking at the sky
when she says i'm tired i need some rest
i say go ahead and lay on my chest
because her smile just lights up the place
when i call her beautiful to her face
if you don't know by now
i'm speaking of my wife
and i am glad God gave her to me for life

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danmartyjake1 commented on my flower

12-07-2009

That is a wonderful powerful poem to your wife and she is a lucky lady, too, to have you. God Bless!

Paradice21 commented on my flower

12-07-2009

A Very lovely and sentimental poem!! Nicely written!!

Paolo commented on my flower

07-27-2009

This is a beautiful way to celebrate your love. I feel the same toward my husband, God brought him to me.

scrye commented on my flower

07-22-2009

so absolutely beautiful poem mrpoetry and your wife is just as lucky as you consider yourself to be. BEAUTIFUL is all i can say on this one. Felt all your emotion and the wording was excellently placed. A 10 from me for this one.

SyndriaM commented on my flower

07-21-2009

this is a wonderful poem!! its nice to know that there are still some good men out there and your wife is a very lucky woman.

Mrpoetry

07/21/2009

thank you i do love my wife dearly

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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the cop 24
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So Cheap 42
MV7 11
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