around my part of town

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    around my part of town

     bullets flying all around
    young black people are dying in my part of town
    when I hear bullets
    I jump from my seat
    Sometimes it bothers me, while I'm trying to sleep
    It's the same old cliche
    The brothers aren't listening to what you have to say
    The devil whispers he killed your homey
    Why don't you take him out (kill) for me
    There he is standing right there
    After you shoot him, don't give a care
    That's the attitude most seem to have
    They run around the corner and have a laugh
    And say killing him was like taking out the trash
    They leave a mother crying
    Because her son is dying
    That's how it is and I'm not lying
    They should be sick and tired
    Of doing what the devil desires
    Because he just wants their souls in ETERNAL FIRE




    written by Marvin C aka Mrpoetry

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    1990lh commented on around my part of town

    10-31-2009

    oh wow here come my tears again, i live in that part ot town and it is hell and i feel like i'm gonna lose my brothers and hell my life too. it is just so crazy i feel so trap like i''m just sitting wating for the worst to happen.
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    BlackButterfly1 commented on around my part of town

    10-06-2009

    I've never lived in this type of environment but I know it does exist. I like the spiritual message behind your writings.
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    bobarobbob commented on around my part of town

    08-18-2009

    well out. NOT a happy poem. But still good. :o)
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    Mosfabulous commented on around my part of town

    07-29-2009

    So true and once again this a good poem. These gangstas around here need to stop. I remember i wrote a poem called Stop and it had something to do with what you are saying i think. Keep on writing and spreading the good positive message to all.
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    miwall513 commented on around my part of town

    07-23-2009

    It is how it is thsnk you for expressing it so well
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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