Don't Go There

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    Don't Go There

    Don't you know that hell is filled with maggots and worms that never die
    They will eat on your flesh as you fry
    You don't wanna go there not even for a visit
    The sight is worse than any horror flick
    God told you to choose life or death
    You made your decision you thought was best
    But it ended up like a wrong turn
    on a one-way street
    Now the maggots and worms will feast on you
    like you were raw meat

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    scrye commented on Don't Go There

    12-04-2009

    Another cry from the mountaintop. Way to pass the message mrp. Keep posting for all who open their eyes and ears to see and be heard. Love this piece, very well written. Thank you for sharing this with us and all who want to see.

    Mrpoetry

    12/04/2009

    my assignment from Jesus is to tell it like it is. Truth so everyone can see thank you for your comments

    jesusfreake commented on Don't Go There

    10-20-2009

    u got it right on.....keepin it real and giving us straight...awesome!

    Mrpoetry

    11/30/2009

    thank you again blue. i will always keep it real, no sugar coating allowed

    Mrpoetry

    11/30/2009

    blue look at the picture I added to the poem

    dumplin commented on Don't Go There

    10-16-2009

    This piece ignites fear of hell in the reader. I hope it saves souls.

    1990lh commented on Don't Go There

    10-09-2009

    wow mrp very powerful keep spreadin the message excellent job

    Mosfabulous commented on Don't Go There

    07-23-2009

    You are right it is time for peole to live their life right including me. I don't want to burn in hell NO WAy. Great poem. I love it.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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