What's Wrong

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    What's Wrong

     What's wrong with these men today
    They either locked up, dead or turned gay
    Because they refuse to own up to their responsibility
    Such as taking care of their family
    Now wonder these women feel left alone
    Because the man is never at home
    And that leaves an open door for the enemy (satan) to creep in
    Leaving the woman vulnerable to sin
    God is not pleased with the man
    Because they refuse to follow His simple plan
    These women are supposed to feel protected
    Not lonely and rejected
    That is why some of them are going the other way
    And finding another women's arm to lay

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    Sx9 commented on What's Wrong

    05-02-2012

    whats wrong well a lot of things, but this poem its alright,and i love it,,the world today is a mess people who make it work is also a mess,everything seems upside down, but with love that can change,,one love,,
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    Mrpoetry

    05/03/2012

    thx for your comments

    armymom1025 commented on What's Wrong

    01-14-2010

    This is great and it is very true! This is very well written.
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    Nataly commented on What's Wrong

    11-01-2009

    No matter i how much i read this. it never gets tiring! love it
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    1990lh commented on What's Wrong

    10-31-2009

    ahaha ok i really like this one to it made me laugh a little and i needed to laugh, but i thought the idea of the poem was strong and te message was pure your words holdd truth
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    Kat1984 commented on What's Wrong

    08-04-2009

    I know that I speak from Woman who see both sides of the fence when comes men being not there for someone my ex couldn't but I prayer and we got divcore but I have find nice man who treats me right you are a man with support from me that it takes strong man and woman to thou to make anything work. well wrote
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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