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    this poem is from my upcoming book paradise ventures 4 this is part 2 of my previous poem about George Bush

    GB2

    GB2

     

    Despite all the crimes you’ve committed

    You’ll take those secrets to your grave and never admit it

    During your time in office, you made a ton of money

    And laughed behind America’s back

    Because you thought it was funny

    How much money does one man need?

    Oh yeah! I forgot you are full of greed

    That’s why you started this phony war

    While the soldiers are out there dying

    You are making more and more

    But if I were you

    I would repent while I have a chance

    Because time waits for no man

    So get rid of that image of the father of lies (satan)

    As you know all of us will die

    And then you are standing in front of God all alone

    In His Glory and Brightness as He sits on His Throne

    So George what is going to be?

    The father of lies or eternally with Me (God)

     

     

     

     

     

    Written by Marvin Crutchfield (thru Jesus Christ)

     

     

    8/5/10

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    ahardwalk commented on GB2

    10-18-2011

    wow a religious political message!! You just called him out though!!!

    Mrpoetry

    10/20/2011

    i probably get in trouble for that poem but so what the world needs to read the truth

    BlackButterfly1 commented on GB2

    01-28-2011

    I think it's your words that make the poetry so powerful. It's a wake up call for all believers. Well done.

    Mrpoetry

    02/09/2011

    thank you but praise God above

    Musicmynded1 commented on GB2

    08-06-2010

    Nice take on things as this...... good interpretation..........10

    Mrpoetry

    08/09/2010

    thank you for your comments

    TuggleBear commented on GB2

    08-06-2010

    This is a really nice poem. I love the emotion that you put into it. I love how it flows too :) You're a wonderful poet. Keep writing :)

    Mrpoetry

    08/23/2010

    thank you for your comments

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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