power of the womb

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    power of the womb

     the pussy is a powerful persuasion
    that is why some men chase it at every occasion
    it can break the strongest man down and make him beg
    when the woman opens the sweet spot between her legs
    did i mention
    it can be lethal when used for evil intentions
    because the pussy has caused many men to fall
    when the woman makes that booty call
    not knowing it's a trap
    like a sheep headed for the ax
    that's why men should think with their brains
    and tell that little head to refrain
    from always wanting that friction
    and let God cure that addiction

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    danmartyjake1 commented on power of the womb

    12-12-2009

    This is awesome and true, too. I enjoyed it. It rings along in a great rhythm and rhyme and it's a fantastic message to all readers......
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    charismajewel commented on power of the womb

    09-28-2009

    I was kind of shocked at your strong use of pussy, but once I got over that, I liked it. I don't know that the phrase"did I mention" is necessary. It broke the flow for me.
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    MsKrystle commented on power of the womb

    08-11-2009

    Short but true, I mean sweet. We dont intentionally use our goodies as a weapon or to trick men. Is it our fault men are so weak? Good poem
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    wagus commented on power of the womb

    08-09-2009

    Title got me here as often see womb/tomb as the start/end of life as how do we know which to set with birth/death... then got into the first line and read on.. It not pussy or dick that causes the trouble they have no emotion rule nothing.. it the brain and what it is taught or not taught that finds trouble.. The young are not taught right/wrong because those who are suppose to teach them this don't know themselves.. Society is failing moving away from God toward becoming want-a-be-Gods..
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    ginga commented on power of the womb

    07-20-2009

    Mr. Poetry, A finely crafted warning on a subject matter that all humans often fall prey to. I love that you titled it the power of the womb. A sure warning to those who should not hook up just to satisfy that urge. Nicely constructed. Ginga
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