KEVIN

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    a poem for my lil niece whose dad passed away

    KEVIN

     Go ahead and release those tears
    That you've been holding for the last two years
    I know it was a sad day
    When your dad took his last breath and passed away
    But rest assured little niece
    Kevin is truly resting in peace
    No nore worries, sickness or diseases
    He is at home with Jesus
    Singing in the heavenly choir
    Right now at this very hour
    So just picture that in your dreams
    That your dad is part of that eternal team



    written by Marvin Crutchfield





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    sassysweet commented on KEVIN

    04-20-2011

    Good poem and very thoughtful. You really put your heart into it.
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    Mrpoetry

    04/20/2011

    my lil niece cried when i gave her this poem so did her mom i only write what God puts on my heart

    gregster commented on KEVIN

    04-12-2011

    good poem very simple and on point to great message
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    Mrpoetry

    04/13/2011

    thanks Mr G for your comments. God is AWESOME

    1990lh commented on KEVIN

    04-12-2011

    awww this is really beautifull soory for the loss. but death is a sad part of life just gotta remember he is in a better place. it's good she has good ppl like to lean on. amazing write mrp. love n peace hugs n kisses be blessed n blissful. :0)
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    Mrpoetry

    04/12/2011

    thanks lil sis for the comments just wanted my lil niece to have peace

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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