Unfinished Poem

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  • Emotional
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  • Life
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  • My Feelings
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  • Pain

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    Um . . . Yeah. A guy I like doesn't know I exist. Even though we have several classes together and I have to explain a lot of things to him. But . . . I'm invisible, I've already proven the theory.

    Unfinished Poem

     It's like this feeling deep inside,
    This yearning that consumes me,
    A thing of the past,
    And more of the present,
    Something that hurts forever.

    It's there like the pulsing of my heart,
    Just something that can't be put on a shelf,
    It's like a hole punched through your heart,
    Nothing can fill it up,
    Except the feel of his touch.

    In ways, it's the only constant of life,
    It's also the hardest to endure

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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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