Don't Hold Back

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    Um . . . About this girl I knew. . . Know. She was different. And I never knew how to act around her. She told me she wanted to tell me something, but was too afraid to tell me.

    Don't Hold Back

       Why are you lookin' at me that way,
    When are you going to say
    All the things that you wanted,
    So don't hold back,
    Don't hold back,
    Everything you wanted to say

      Because I'm not holding back,
    Anymore in front of you,
    I never liked you calling me sweetie,
    Never liked the baby girl,
    Just didn't know,
    Never knew,
    How to react in fornt of you

      But I'm not holding back,
    Never holding back anymore,
    So, don't hold back,
    Don't hold back,
    Everything you wanted to say

      When are you going to say,
    All the things that you wanted,
    I don't want you to hold back,
    Don't hold back,
    Because I know you don't want to

      Maybe I won't know what you wanted to say,
    So, tell me right now,
    Tell me straight up,
    But most of importantly,
    Don't hold anything back.

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    redbloodink commented on Don't Hold Back

    09-01-2010

    I don't hold back every thing but at times I hold back some things...... Love is a tough thing you know I love this lady friend of mine and surly don't want to she says Dave i'm not in compation over bra's and panties but nor am I I just wear them...... any way I told her I love her and it didn't work out to well for me... So I hold back ........... great write and I understand it .... But it also has it's own meaning to me............ red
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    Tempestlady commented on Don't Hold Back

    07-22-2009

    "But mot importantly don't give up" is what i was thinking. Almst lke a sonnet, full of desire to help. Tongue tied, would have been my title. Goodwrite.
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    StarDreamer

    07/23/2009

    Heh, yeah. But, the whole thing was for her to not hold back from me anymore, because I'm tired of it. Thank you (:

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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