these people....

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    these people....

     the people here think they know me
    but how can they know what they cant see
    who i really wish i could be
    so many people think they know my history
    they have never seen me cry
    they have never seen my bad side
    they dont know how i have to face fear
    and i cant even shed a tear
    they dont know my past they dont even relise that thier lives past by fast
    they dont know my escape
    they dont control my fate
    they dont know how i lost my lover and bestfriend
    they know how it had to all end
    they have never seen me high
    or layed on the floor and just wish they would die
    they dont even know i write poetry
    they sont really know me

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    ScottishBard commented on these people....

    11-09-2009

    Very honest. I like how you break it down. I will look back from time to time. I expect good things from you.
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    k9kinnon

    11/30/2010

    thankyou.

    k9kinnon

    03/01/2011

    thanks :) i hope that i am blessed and get better with my poetry :)

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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