let me help

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    let me help

    I wonder why
    you cry
    in the shadows of your room
    is it because everyone says you are doomed
    why do you hold it inside
    and let your feelings hide
    i think its a shame
    that you are in pain
    but i can help
    and act as your saftey belt
    but you just make us all wonder
    why cant we help you little brother
    i know im young but im not dumb
    i know how you feel
    i know its a big deal
    its hard to watch you cry
    and all i can do is stand on the side

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    kittman101 commented on let me help

    07-01-2009

    Yea thats a weakness i have. I cant watch people cry because my heart goes out to them and i too will cry. My conscious is my guide as the voices come from indies. and i know when the pain is real, because its other people pain that i truly feel.

    PoeticMind commented on let me help

    11-20-2008

    YOU'S A BIG PERSON ON FAMILY AFFAIRS...

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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