my heart

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    my heart

     if you look inside my heart
    you'd see its very dark
    you'd see how much i cry
    and wish i'd just die
    you'd see all things that i've lost
    and how my love has no cost
    you'd see how i miss my father
    and how i miss my sisters and brothers
    you'd see death
    you'd see all those who have left
    you'd see a new start
    you'd see a broken heart

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    sassysweet commented on my heart

    06-29-2009

    Very good! This is a good one too. Tells me how you feel, what is going on with you and it tells me, how others see you.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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