Dont go

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    • k9kinnon
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    Dont go
    The light leaves your eyes
    as I watch you die
    I wish I could help
    but your fate has been delt
    I cried thinking of you
    I was of unsure of what to do
    All I could do is cry
    and hope you would make it by
    but you did'nt
    I could not beleive it
    I still wonder why
    you had to die
    It was all because of one child
    who is gonna be locked up for awhile
    which is still not enough
    because you are gonna miss so much stuff
    I will never forget you
    you will always be my boo
    I love you and know you are in a better place
    and hopefully soon I'll get to see your happy face
    so I must not be sad nor shy
    I must tell you now, goodbye

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    kittman101 commented on Dont go

    07-01-2009

    I know its hard to let go of the ones you love. No matter how much time passes they will always be in our hearts and mind. Keep expressing yourself how you see fit. The words are amazing
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    k9kinnon

    11/30/2010

    yeah its been alomost 4 years and still feels like a fresh wound when i think of it. i miss him so much and cant wait to go to heaven and see his shining face there. but until then i hope to make people aware of the violence and hope to change thier lives so that others will not have to suffer what i face every day.

    connsk8 commented on Dont go

    06-05-2009

    I was intrigued to read more of your work and surpised by other's reactions, I think you have great potential, you have passion and feeling which I feel every good poet needs, I think your work is just the begininning of what is yet to come, an 8 for you!!!
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    PoeticMind commented on Dont go

    11-20-2008

    awww DAMN MAN...SRRY TO HEAR BOUT THAT.. DON'T LOOK AT "THEIR" PASSING AS A GOOD BYE... MORE SO "SEE YOU LATER!"
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