Portrait of a Saint

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No Two loves you more than this.

Portrait of a Saint

he surpasses me in thought, word,
and deed
God is surely pleased
with him
his glasses coincide
with the intelligence inside
not keeping it for himself
with compassion he helps
not just me
although it appears to be
just me
he hurts, he cries there are dark circles under
his eyes
I spy on him with wonder
his voice, a soothing timbre
he speaks and I am better
Sometimes I wish I am he
instead of me
perhaps some form of Jealousy?
or just the state I'm in?
his stride creates a breeze
his white coat flaps behind him
a Superhero he seems
he searches outside and within
it is hard to find
cures for the troubled mind
Dear Lord comfort him


1989

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Cryptics500 commented on Portrait of a Saint

02-24-2015

An Adam F-Bomb PS TO SIR WITH LOVE

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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