Mom

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  • Confusion

    Mom
    mom, you say love me
    mom,but why do you shout at me
    mom,you say want us to commnicate
    mom, all i hear is tones of hate

    mom,there are three of us
    mom, i feel im the only one you cuss
    mom, you say your proud
    mom, your actions are different and loud

    mom, you treat me different than the others
    mom, thats why i dont speak why bother
    mom, i understand you never done this before
    mom, theres help open up the door

    mom, no matter what know that i lvoe you
    mom, but the feelings i have for you are confused
    mom, i wish to straighten them out
    mom, please dont shout

    mom, i dont mean to make you cry
    mom, but you have left my brain to fry
    mom, i wish you understand where im coming from
    mom, my mind is beating like a drum

    mom, i end this with a happy ending
    mom, but my thoughts are still pending
    mom, i love you more than forever
    mom, this is a problem we faced together

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    Tyme commented on Mom

    04-19-2011

    Whew...heavy. It's hard being in a strained relationship. 2 things; 1) I know people who KNOW their parents don't love them; it's demonstrated everyday and they cannot get away because of appearances and good lawyer money. 2) not to blame or accuse, but if you escalate an issue to test the limits of your Mom's love, expect to be spoken to harshly. This is a response of love because she knows you can do better and is frustrated with disobedience. one thing extra. If there really is abuse going on, don't wait, get help. Talk to a counselor. If you know she loves you, be as patient as you can because parenting comes with no guide book and we as individuals are so different. You know you love your Mom. Do your best to be obedient because it sounds as if "she's proud" of you so she does express it . Communication is work. obedience is work but it all leads to growth and a closer relationship that you'll understand when you get older.
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    freemansvoice commented on Mom

    04-19-2011

    parents learn as they go. She'll be a great grandmother someday. someday you'll find yourself being her
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    Sx9 commented on Mom

    07-27-2010

    we need more love,this work is strong and to the point,,yes it is still love but the vibes continue even after the words,,walk good,,
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    Tempestlady commented on Mom

    07-10-2009

    The relationship between mothe and daughter is difficult at best. am a yeller too. I am sorry the communication is so hard for you two. Write on....
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    DiabloSniper commented on Mom

    06-16-2009

    well written (once again)... powerful piece dripping with emotion
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