Her Finals Words

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    Her Finals Words

     She looks back upon childhood
    and she vaguely sees anything good

    Her life story is stroy is a true one no lie
    and when she tells it she sees herself die

    As a child she once was abused
    her mom didnt see it she couldnt figure
    out the clues

    She was only seven at the time, for Gods sake
    so.. she would like to ask "where was her break?"

    She wont lie you turned her better for a whlie
    no one not even her mom could make her smile

    She went through many emotional rollercpasters
    because she couldnt stand seeing you touch her sister

    You are an evil person for what you did
    beacasue she was just an innocent kid

    But on the brighter side of all wrong
    that you have done
    you dont realize how much she has become

    You turned her from an innocent child
    to a smart young lady
    and she wont turn into you; which you are shady

    You taught her how to turn a negative into a positive
    and for that she is now more sensitive

    Her final words are " I meant to thank you all the while"
    because if it wasnt for you she wouldnt be able to truly smile

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    kpeery09 commented on Her Finals Words

    03-06-2010

    It's truly wonderfully written, excellent work. I love it
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    redbloodink commented on Her Finals Words

    02-02-2010

    smashing....... How you took me on a ride of this hurt to thank you because you made me stronger then any one would ever know..... I will push on and survive.... And become all that I strive to be.... great job...... red
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    Tempestlady commented on Her Finals Words

    07-10-2009

    Shoulda turned him in so he couldn't do it to no one else! Great write, straight from the heart. Write on.....
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    MrGee commented on Her Finals Words

    07-10-2009

    Excellent! It paints a good picture and rhymns well. i especially liked the verse - You turned her from an innocent child to a smart young lady and she wont turn into you; which is shady. And it seems that someone was naughty with your sister, I hate that, no one shud hurt young girls. I did however, want to make one comment Do you proofread your poems for spelling errors? That being said Keep up the good work.
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    cmlestrade commented on Her Finals Words

    07-06-2009

    You certainly captured the theme of this poem. As an advocate for children my heart breaks and I ask that eternal question when will we stop hurting our kids. Those who don't stop the hurting are doing the hurting as well. Anywho,the rhythm was a little awkward and you have to watch the spelling but the meaning of the poem was perfectly clear. This isn't weak emotional venting but a solid treatment of a topic which is covered up far too often. very very powerful, thank you.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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