Deep Down Inside

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  • Confusion

    Deep Down Inside

    On the outside you will see me as a strong individual

    But when you look at me deep down you'll find
    a humble person

    my smile like the sun it lights up the room

    But my emotions become my worst enemy
    they are at a crossroad

    when i cry, it feels like acid runnin down my face

    my soul is black as the night

    my heart beats a thousand times more
    to help me believe in myself

    but... with each breath, my breath becomes fainter each day

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    squadbuddy954 commented on Deep Down Inside

    11-18-2009

    A lot of people have those deep feeling that is buried inside them thats hidden from the world

    Chaos128 commented on Deep Down Inside

    06-17-2009

    Kym, Your style is so direct it reads like you were speaking the words instead of writing of them. This is an ability few poets have.

    Chrisjan commented on Deep Down Inside

    05-29-2009

    WOW ! That is reaching inside yourself. It is awesome to find one as honest, with themselves as you. Thank you for sharing.

    baddreams commented on Deep Down Inside

    04-30-2009

    nice, and its about you

    lonewolf commented on Deep Down Inside

    04-19-2009

    WOW!! such a great poem. i feel like this much of the time.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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