Computer Love

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    Computer Love
    There you were flashing at the top of my screen
    I wondered who might you be?

    We talked for a while and this i learned
    That the other people were none of our concern

    Hearing your voice while we're talking
    Makes my heart want to jump out and sing

    This strange new emotion that i feel
    Still wondering if you could be real

    You don't see me as a little girl
    But a smart woman in this dumbass world

    I'm glad that i have gotten the chance to meet you
    And the feelings that we created are fresh and new

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    kpeery09 commented on Computer Love

    03-14-2010

    I love it, its truly a wonderful poem. I give you 10 for a wonderful read.
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    Chaos128 commented on Computer Love

    12-16-2009

    Ha ha… it’s one of the first rules of compatibility; hooking up with someone that has the rare gift of seeing you as you see yourself. It’s not the whole answer, but it’s a damn good start!
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    Knwldge commented on Computer Love

    11-26-2009

    i like it, its short and makes u think, who and how the other person on the end of the computer is and how they can make u feel, jus off a quick convo
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    squadbuddy954 commented on Computer Love

    11-18-2009

    This poem caught my attention because i wrote Computer Love II replying to MsKrystle Computer Love if you read them both it is awesome. But yours is very well written and i like the part see you a smart woman in this dumbass world
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    kym

    11/18/2009

    thank you very much. i have noticed that this title and feeling of having a computer love is very common lol have you had one?

    KagenoKitsune commented on Computer Love

    09-27-2009

    perhaps we all have this feeling at some point. it is good to relate to one another as people without boundry, without influence. i like this very much
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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