her final words part II

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her final words part II



by: linda
orginally by: kym

Reflections of her childhood past She rarely sees the good. Her story isn't rare but true, no lie and in these reflections she sees herself die A child so abused and forelorn She hated and cursed the day she was born... Her Mother didn't have a clue Of
what her poor daughter was going thru. Seven Years old at the time, for Heaven's sake In her minds eye she deserved a break. She walked around with burdens galore.. She couldn't fake a smile no more. Not even her mom could make her grin Cause of all
But with all you've tried There is still a brighter side God made my sister number one And I'm so proud of what she's become She now lives her life as a bright young lady Unlike You . YOu are so shady She's very sensitive about her past.But she will strive to do what's right And she's not giving you a second thought tonight.. She'll live out her life and not look back At the times You threw her life off track She's vibrant and youthful... What else can I say. But thanks to You She can w

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kpeery09 commented on her final words part II

03-06-2010

I love it, keep up the good work, the flow of it was beautifully and wonderfully written.

anderneglakay commented on her final words part II

06-20-2009

that is good is that fiction or true everything was on point

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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