Words Written In The Sunset

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    Words Written In The Sunset

    When I think of her

    There's a perfect rhythm in my heart

    I can hear a soft sweet melody

    And it makes my speech an art

     

    She jests, I jest

    And we speak in subtle vagueties

    And she makes my words flow like a wine

    On all sunsets such as these

     

    And best when written; I cannot speak

    She tells me I've such a way with words

    And so simply do her own inspire

    Though best I'm never heard

     

    So write in rhythm as my heart beats faster

    All so beautiful a muse might read

    I hope she feels as she makes me

    On all sunsets such as these

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    MysticFalls commented on Words Written In The Sunset

    06-20-2011

    I like it it pretty speacially the line at the end "All so beautiful a muse might read".
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    TheRaven

    06/20/2011

    Thanks, I'm really appreciative that you took the time to read my poem, doubly so that you enjoyed it.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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