Ask Me How I'm Doing

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    • TheRaven
    • My writings are far and fewer between these days. At least I've started working on refining what I post.

    Ask Me How I'm Doing

     To tell the truth I'm drinking again
    But that is simply a bold faced fact
    I find that when the days at end
    It's all I have to help relax

    Also, I'm smoking quite a lot
    But still, really, what would you expect?
    Do you know the reason that I started
    It's alright and yes, I'm sure it will be my death

    I'm having my damned visions again
    But I never told you that before
    I just don't think you would believe me
    Call it a dream you simply would ignore

    So sit here while we watch the sunset
    And I'll assure you that I'm alright
    Because I wish you not think ill of me
    When we depart and I'm alone again tonight

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    Rvanskike commented on Ask Me How I'm Doing

    04-29-2010

    Dude, I signed up here just to read and comment on your poems. And to ask... You are an amazing writer, have you ever thought about trying to turn your poems into songs?
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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