Ask Me How I'm Doing

1 Comments

Tags:
  • Depressed
    • TheRaven
    • My writings are far and fewer between these days. At least I've started working on refining what I post.

    Ask Me How I'm Doing

    To tell the truth I'm drinking again
    But that is simply a bold faced fact
    I find that when the days at end
    It's all I have to help relax

    Also, I'm smoking quite a lot
    But still, really, what would you expect?
    Do you know the reason that I started
    It's alright and yes, I'm sure it will be my death

    I'm having my damned visions again
    But I never told you that before
    I just don't think you would believe me
    Call it a dream you simply would ignore

    So sit here while we watch the sunset
    And I'll assure you that I'm alright
    Because I wish you not think ill of me
    When we depart and I'm alone again tonight

    Poem Comments

    (1)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    Rvanskike commented on Ask Me How I'm Doing

    04-29-2010

    Dude, I signed up here just to read and comment on your poems. And to ask... You are an amazing writer, have you ever thought about trying to turn your poems into songs?

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    TheRaven’s Poems (22)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Words Written In The Sunset 1
    Shut In 0
    Lay Me To Rest 0
    Writing On The Walls 0
    Two Words 0
    Ask Me How I'm Doing 1
    Curious Motives 1
    Why Be A Hero? 0
    A Little Regret 0
    Whispering to the Wind 0
    To My Muse 0
    Dragging on Death 0
    Love 0
    Cliche Love 0
    Bridges and Graves 1
    To Let Go 0
    True Love and Regret 0
    Steel Kisses 0
    A Kiss 1
    Silence of Souls 0
    Perfect Blue Eyes 0
    Never Knights 1