A Kiss

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    A Kiss
    A kiss to span the ocean
    With passion I'd never seen
    With it left me dizzy
    Far too real to be a dream

    In a moment I was smiling
    Silence within my grin
    She was giggling quite a bit
    And so we kissed again

    Everything felt natural
    It was a cold night though
    We talked a little longer
    But in the end she had to go

    As I was fixing to leave the car
    I thought I'd catch her of guard a bit
    But when I went for one last kiss
    She readily met me with her lips

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    ccslim commented on A Kiss

    02-12-2009

    Hehehe da kiss! wOOt! Great content and plot. Shaky meter in the end.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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