What If

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    What If
    What if I was the mountains and you were the sky?
    Or if I was a star and you were my light?
    The mountains would reach the sky and the star would be my sight.

    All around us the energy of the sky.
    Right now the moon is full of light.
    Crescent shaped hearts of you and I.

    What if you were a jet plane and I was the sky?
    Or if you were a fever and I was the heat inside?
    The jet plane would fly and the fever would be my ride.

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    poetrygal45 commented on What If

    05-13-2009

    I could feel this one. I like your style it's different. Good!
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    WickedAngel commented on What If

    03-30-2009

    I like this
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    Oluromeo commented on What If

    02-25-2009

    this is cool and nice... kepp it up....
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    joker88 commented on What If

    02-20-2009

    This was a little confusing for me. But like I said before am a little new to this, maybe I missed it.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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