Blind Spot of Life

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    Blind Spot of Life

    As the tide rises the water shall break.
    The wind will blow as I fall asleep.
    I feel the faint mist of rain.
    Almost asleep, I feel no pain.

    Elderly are fragile.
    Let the rapid tide be their strength.
    A cup of passion be their sake.
    Tides mending the ache of mistake.

    A fire was once a flame.
    A thorn once a seed.
    As day becomes night, a spark becomes light.
    Step after step is a blind spot of life.

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    kayjill commented on Blind Spot of Life

    07-19-2009

    worded very sweetly!!! i like it... it says it exact

    acjtb commented on Blind Spot of Life

    03-11-2009

    excellent

    cottonluv commented on Blind Spot of Life

    02-18-2009

    nice,short and powerful.good work

    bforibus commented on Blind Spot of Life

    02-18-2009

    that was deeply profound and the flow as excellent. great poem. loved the visual gaveit a 10

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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