Sitting Around

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    Sitting Around
    I sit around.
    I stare at the clouds.
    I see the stars.
    I look around.
    I feel the water come pouring down.
    I sit here thinking of painless thoughts.
    What went on here yesterday?
    Just painless thoughts of today.

    The sun starts to rise.
    I stare off to the horizon.
    I think of how I could have been here that long.

    My body is wet.
    My feet are cold.
    I lived another heartless night.
    Temporarily relief from any fright.
    What went on here yesterday?
    Just painless thoughts of today.

    I sat around.
    I stared at the clouds.
    I saw the stars.
    I looked around.
    I felt the water come pouring down.

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    nini2323 commented on Sitting Around

    02-21-2009

    I really like this one I love the line what happened here yesterday it leaves alot to the imagination and allows the reader to make it personal
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    Nerissie commented on Sitting Around

    02-16-2009

    I enjoyed it and it reminded me of myself.
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    BridgetBowen commented on Sitting Around

    02-16-2009

    Interesting I like it!
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    joanlorraine commented on Sitting Around

    02-16-2009

    NIce write. I liked your other one better.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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