Merrilyn’s Profile
- Age: 43
- Location: Moses Lake, WA
- Gender: Female
- Country: United States
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Biography
I was wondering if you guys could read some of my poems and give me some feed back so i can see if i need to change anything, i realize that there are some spelling errors, thats cause i submited them before i read them carefully enough obviously. I love this site and there are some awsome ppl on here i enjoy reading your poems and i love writing them as well thanks for all your input and hope to read more of your guys and gals work in the future. THANK YOU
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Recent Poems
- Dark embrace
- Tags: Dark Poetry
- Your the darkend slumber, lightning, thunder, with hate, inside your eyes. You feind for blood,darkend lust, and snack on childrens crys. You hide ...
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- Warning XXX
- Tags: Erotic
- Love me,rub me, stick it in, i'll lick your balls, and make you grin, Grab my tits,and pull my hair, Bend me over a electric chair, Spank my ass and make me ...
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- A husbands heart
- Tags: Love
- When he's in the wrong, be a loving wife, do the best that you can do. Keeping in mind, that your husband is strong, yet he has feelings to. Show him your ...
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- Complete
- Tags: Love
- You and me, are like leaves on a tree, I wouldn't be a tree without. You can put your trust in me, like i'v put mine in you, I'll be faithful, without a ...
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Jolly profile comment
03-27-2009
- Sorry I don't respond quickly, I'm preparing for a move to Germany and between passports and crap I have to do for my dog I've been busier than a one legged man in an ass kicking contest. How you doing? LOL, within the hours I'll have a happy poem posted, you should check it out. It'll be called "Samantha"
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Skies profile comment
03-26-2009
- HI Merrilyn, NICE TO HAVE YOU ON BOARD. THANKS FOR STOPPING BY:) HAVE THE WEEKEND OFF, SO WILL SPEND SOME TIME READING TOMORROW:) AGAIN, WELCOME:)
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Jolly profile comment
03-23-2009
- I have happiness, just not much. I take full advantadge of what little I do have however. My poetry is a vent, as well as a verbal assault. Don't think I'm just depressed, though I appreciate the concern, lol. Have a good day.
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pocketofdreams6 profile comment
03-11-2009
- Thanks for the request, I will read some more of your poetry when I get some spare time :)