Iron Horse

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    Iron Horse
    It was cold today for an iron horse.
    At first, fingertips numbed... that iron horse.

    Each second passed I felt the cold.
    Iron horse... take control.

    I felt like I was at the movies...
    watching and no control.

    Numb again, this time my mind.
    Iron horse... a bonfire to the cold.

    On the cold road... I will leave it there.
    Iron horse... nothing to fear.


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    FranzJ commented on Iron Horse

    11-29-2009

    i did it once - it was enough for me - nice------------------------
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    Connected2u commented on Iron Horse

    03-19-2009

    Spoken like a true rider! I love the ride, the true ride and all it stands for! Great peice.
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    Writing4Sanity commented on Iron Horse

    03-16-2009

    fav line - bonfire 2 cold...pic added 2. i'm a rider myself. peace
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    EmberRota commented on Iron Horse

    02-16-2009

    for anyone that has rode, this poem speaks wonders of the cold ride....done it a time or two
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    bforibus commented on Iron Horse

    02-16-2009

    it was good on analogies and metaphors. it just felt like it didnt have a soul in it. but loved the subject of bitter and lonilness
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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