Until the day I was Saved

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    Until the day I was Saved

     Because my journey

    Didn’t start till the day I was saved
    Took 32 years to get to this place

    I was walkin the path
    That led straight to the grave
    Look in my eyes
    Knew that I was afraid

    I would go to church
    Try and capture my faith
    I was ashamed
    To look the preacher in his face

    Im just a sinner in the eyes
    Of the eyes of the god
    I never thought that I would
    Make it this far

    Me and brother
    Used to steal em’ and rob
    We was happy bein nixxas
    Aint wanna look for a job


    My pops was hurtin
    Thinking where did he lose us
    I thought the devil
    Just was here to confuse us

    Turns out I was inviting him in
    And I chose to live a life full of sin
    I blamed my problems on my job and my wife
    Reality is that I wanted that life


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    cmlestrade commented on Until the day I was Saved

    09-13-2009

    This is very raw and very expressive. It is hard to write the truth but the truth does set us free. Wonderful work.
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    madpoet123 commented on Until the day I was Saved

    05-31-2009

    FINISH THIS...YOU TALK AND ITS NICE BUT THIS IS NOT REALLY A POEM,IT COULD BE A RAP SONG..TRY RAPPIN IT DID YA ALREADY,OK SO MISS OPINION COULD END UP MY HANDLE,BUT i LIKE WHAT YOURE SAYING,JUST NOT THE WAY YOURE SAYIN IT. kEEP WRITING
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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