tWo hEartS

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    tWo hEartS
    She only has one heart
    To offer and for someone to have
    But she has to be smart
    In giving all her love.
    She met this wonderful man
    Who came from a good clan
    He showers her with love,
    With all the good things a woman must have.
    Then there's this other one
    A person full of fun
    So comfortable and sweet
    With an attitude so neat.
    Both men have good qualities
    Both offer eternal bliss
    Both have sweet kisses
    And both don't remiss.
    She's ready to give her heart
    But so confused who will be the one
    She wishes she has two hearts
    Two hearts not only one.

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    FoF commented on tWo hEartS

    03-19-2009

    Rhyming feels manipulative in order to rhyme and rhythm does not follow through.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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