A Talk with the Mirror

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  • viejay04
  • I would like to thank everyone for reading my poems and for giving me positive feedbacks! You guys keep me more inspired! I thank you all with all my heart! =)

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True beauty is not physical...it is skin deep!

A Talk with the Mirror

Mirror, mirror on the wall
Please tell me what you truly see;
I wouldn't mind the truth
As long as it will set me free.

The Mirror answered:

"I see two bright eyes
That always see what's good;
A pair of ears that are willing
To listen to the woes;
A nose that smells and accepts
The nature of a person;
And lips that speak gentle and caring words."

Mirror, mirror in front of me
Please do kindly tell me;
What are the other things
That the others cannot see.

The Mirror smiled and said:

"They focus on your physical appearance,
Some do miss the most important ones;
Shoulders that catch a friend's tears;
Arms that give warmth and comfort;
A pair of hands that offer help;
And two feet that always try to walk
on a righteous path."

Mirror, do you not know
Sometimes it hurts to know
That what they only see
Is the physical appearance of me
How I wish that they will look closer
And be nice enough to see the real me.

The Mirror then replied:

"True beauty lies within your heart
And your mind has always a place for understanding;
And believe me, you are a real beauty
Inside and out."

Mirror, mirror, you are very kind
I hope that people will truly use their eyes
To see me the way that you do
And accept me for what and who I really am.

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commonreactor commented on A Talk with the Mirror

03-25-2010

nice write! I especially liked the last reply the mirror gave. Thanks for sharing! :)

viejay04

03/25/2010

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

blueberry commented on A Talk with the Mirror

03-19-2010

Interesting poem. I like that you kept it optimistic!

FranzJ commented on A Talk with the Mirror

03-18-2010

if only all mirrors could the good in everybody - I like your mirror

viejay04

03/19/2010

I'm sure my mirror will like you, too because my mirror only sees the good things in a person. =)

BringMeBullets commented on A Talk with the Mirror

03-18-2010

Aww.. This is precious! A great write. Thank you for sharing. A ten from me.

viejay04

03/18/2010

thanks brb! =)

kesavkavumthara commented on A Talk with the Mirror

03-18-2010

I really like thepoem, because it reflets the real vision of man. wish you all the best!

viejay04

03/18/2010

glad you liked it! and thanx for appreciating it =)

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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