A Talk with the Mirror

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    • viejay04
    • I would like to thank everyone for reading my poems and for giving me positive feedbacks! You guys keep me more inspired! I thank you all with all my heart! =)

    Poem Commentary

    True beauty is not physical...it is skin deep!

    A Talk with the Mirror

     Mirror, mirror on the wall
    Please tell me what you truly see;
    I wouldn't mind the truth
    As long as it will set me free.

    The Mirror answered:

    "I see two bright eyes
    That always see what's good;
    A pair of ears that are willing
    To listen to the woes;
    A nose that smells and accepts
    The nature of a person;
    And lips that speak gentle and caring words."

    Mirror, mirror in front of me
    Please do kindly tell me;
    What are the other things
    That the others cannot see.

    The Mirror smiled and said:

    "They focus on your physical appearance,
    Some do miss the most important ones;
    Shoulders that catch a friend's tears;
    Arms that give warmth and comfort;
    A pair of hands that offer help;
    And two feet that always try to walk
    on a righteous path."

    Mirror, do you not know
    Sometimes it hurts to know
    That what they only see
    Is the physical appearance of me
    How I wish that they will look closer
    And be nice enough to see the real me.

    The Mirror then replied:

    "True beauty lies within your heart
    And your mind has always a place for understanding;
    And believe me, you are a real beauty
    Inside and out."

    Mirror, mirror, you are very kind
    I hope that people will truly use their eyes
    To see me the way that you do
    And accept me for what and who I really am.

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    commonreactor commented on A Talk with the Mirror

    03-25-2010

    nice write! I especially liked the last reply the mirror gave. Thanks for sharing! :)
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    viejay04

    03/25/2010

    Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

    blueberry commented on A Talk with the Mirror

    03-19-2010

    Interesting poem. I like that you kept it optimistic!
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    FranzJ commented on A Talk with the Mirror

    03-18-2010

    if only all mirrors could the good in everybody - I like your mirror
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    viejay04

    03/19/2010

    I'm sure my mirror will like you, too because my mirror only sees the good things in a person. =)

    BringMeBullets commented on A Talk with the Mirror

    03-18-2010

    Aww.. This is precious! A great write. Thank you for sharing. A ten from me.
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    viejay04

    03/18/2010

    thanks brb! =)

    kesavkavumthara commented on A Talk with the Mirror

    03-18-2010

    I really like thepoem, because it reflets the real vision of man. wish you all the best!
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    viejay04

    03/18/2010

    glad you liked it! and thanx for appreciating it =)

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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