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    I'll be the cat if you'll be my canary, 
    I promise I'll make things very, very,
    easy were the words slipping from my lips
    with my eyes on your lids and my hands on your hips.
    If I swallow you up with a hiss and a grin...
    ...where's the promise you'll come back again?
    Flutter your wings, lift off in flight;
    if you don't leave ground now, there's chance you might
    never will I ever want you more
    than when I ran upstairs, ego sore
    andIheardyourfeetscrapethefloor
    andIknewtomorrowthere'dbeastorm
    butIdidn'tCAREIwantedyouMORE
    thanalltheraintheskycouldpour
    upon our heads as we swung on swings,
    whispering stories, telling me things
    about your grandmother and lint and fireflies
    and the way the rain hit the lids of my eyes
    like the way you hit the lid off my life,
    knocked it clean off with a scalpel, a knife,
    sewed yourself in where she used to stand.
    With you it's easy; no silent demands.
    No wavering looks. No shuddering hands.

    I'm letting you in, cause you'll understand.

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    EyesOfRain commented on title coming soon... or not I HAVE NO TITLE sorry oh wait nobody's reading this

    08-30-2012

    Wow this piece is very insightful and melodramatic in a curious and perceptible way. Great job.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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