Black Lace Ribbon

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    Black Lace Ribbon

     

    Over purple-bruised flesh
    spans black lace ribbon.
    Such a poor veil, such a poor disguise,
    a poor infliction, a poor demise.
    Consider it gone, under makeup and fabric,
    so hidden by a cloaking of thin lies,
    smiles, laughs, jokes.
    Under jeans and t-shirts and black lace ribbon,
    black and blue and greenily yellow,
    fading.
    Little seen pain,
    but such familiar black lace ribbon.
    This deceit like thin black ice,
    it might break,
    but who's to say they even saw it?

     

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    sk8erpoet commented on Black Lace Ribbon

    03-09-2011

    i love this poem...no matter what people to do to hide what is on the outside..you can still see what they feel on the inside...great write...sk8

    brokenhearted11

    03/09/2011

    exactly. masks only cover so much. thank you(:

    angelchaser commented on Black Lace Ribbon

    02-15-2011

    I am all to familiar with women who've tried to hide their abuse with clothing and make-up. Any man who would beat a woman is a worthless pile of human garbage. That said, good poem as always, sweetpea. I love your work:)

    brokenhearted11

    02/15/2011

    i know, its absolutely horrible. any one who woul beat a woman or a child is,,a worthless pile of INhuman garbage. but anyways, thank you!!!!!!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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