Be Okay

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Be Okay

Eat, babe, eat something.
Don't treat yourself this way.
You can't go on forever.
Please.
For me.
Eat lunch.
Eat breakfast.
I dont care,
just eat!
I cant stand to see you
doing this to yourself.
I cry when I think about it.
I read into it
so fucking much.
Promise me you'll be okay.
At least for today.

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angelchaser commented on Be Okay

02-05-2011

If you had told me you were 20 and not twelve, based only on your poetry, I would have believed you:)

brokenhearted11

02/05/2011

aw, thanks! haha i should do that one day xD but this is hardly a poem at all.

angelchaser

02/05/2011

Honey, you need to stop putting your poetry down, you deserve much credit to write as well as you do at only 12 yrs of age.

brokenhearted11

02/05/2011

look, i know some of my new stuff is good. but this isnt.

angelchaser

02/05/2011

Yes it is, honey. Your comment about this poem is why I wrote "brokenhearted11 :her poetry" so there :P

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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