They just breath deep

1 Comments

They just breath deep

There are some who will never know the love of mother or truly feel the joy of brother.

It has been said that blood is thicker than water but what of those who don't know father. There are some with no trustworthy friend or anyone else on whom to depend.

These are the ones who just breath deep in hopes that a breath might bring some relief.

With eyes closed and hands pressed in prayer or eyes wide open and face blank with stare. They think deep and ponder life over there. Over there where the grass is always greener and peace seems to abound. Where the joy of laughter seems to be the only sound. Where every kind word seems sincere and there is never any place for fear. Wondering, "if there is a place for me there?"

These are the ones who just breath deep in hopes that a breath might bring some relief.

Poem Comments

(1)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

mdpoetgirl commented on They just breath deep

05-31-2009

You are really talented. This is so sad, but true. This is a song of lamentation for the orphans of the world.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

hopdaddy’s Poems (28)

Title Comments
Title Comments
There Are No True Skittels 0
The Hope for Three Score and Ten 0
The Forgotten Door 0
It’s Only Crying When Someone Hears You 0
Dreams 1
Earth Angel 1
08/28/88 0
You and I 1
The Teasure behind the Veil 0
I knew you'd come... 3
Silence 3
My Heart 0
I have seen 1
Recovered Love 1
The Storm 1
The Future 1
Your Eyes 1
From Spring til Fall I waited 2
A Prayer for Rowanda 0
My Beautiful Teacher 0
I believe 0
Beautiful Rowanda 0
A mother's ears 1
The place that we call home 1
They just breath deep 1
Beautiful is her name 3
Why do I cry 2
Today I met someone 1