The Hunt for Delectable Expression

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February 8, 2013 I had fun with this poem. I sit to compose and sit to consume. Each idea and ingredient, I give it room <3

The Hunt for Delectable Expression

I search for words like I do for food
Each room each shelf each drawer
I reject the things that aren't good
But then when my supplies is short
I return to sift the rejects again
I settle for the bagel that's not a baguette
Monterey Jack will have to do
I settle for the juice that's not fresh fruit
Pudding instead of ice cream? Ew!
I just can't stand the bad combination
So I pause after the preparation
I put down my pen. I'm off to the store
Where the options given are so much more
The thesaurus displays from plenty to choose
But the word I like is too long to use
But I like it too much to let it loose
So goodbye spare words or hello new line!
A little bit longer is still fine
I oppose disposing of left-overs
Maybe not now but I'll eat them later
I'll exercise to make room in my gut
I'll expand the story if I must
Every line I spent time on to construct
Must absolutely be wisely stuffed
Tweak the theme and revise the title
My heart and stomach are never idle
Somewhere somewhere I'll make them all fit!
And be left feeling this was so worth it. 

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tierra7 commented on The Hunt for Delectable Expression

02-08-2013

.Ohhh what an Awesome Piece... I Adore it!!! ((((huggz))))Tierra@}-'-,

SecretAngel3

02/09/2013

I adore your adoration! And you taking the time to share your thoughts

dahlusion commented on The Hunt for Delectable Expression

02-08-2013

Such an original title that also delivers a unique poem—bravo!

SecretAngel3

02/09/2013

Thank you! I'm guessing the title is what drew you to it.

AlainMR commented on The Hunt for Delectable Expression

02-08-2013

Excellent poem and the developpment of ideas is very interesting, I find my own way to find words, to find the "delectable expression"...

SecretAngel3

02/09/2013

Thank you. Everyone has a different process :) and a different source for inspiration. This is not the first time I use food as a metaphor.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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